tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post4623402440528069464..comments2023-12-31T18:57:00.607-08:00Comments on Signed.....bkm: grecian bluesigned...bkmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-25515092696833398322012-07-04T10:51:54.599-07:002012-07-04T10:51:54.599-07:00Barb, this quite a lovely piece. Beautiful visuall...Barb, this quite a lovely piece. Beautiful visually. I haven't been to read you in ages, but now I am on vacation. I am hoping for some luxurious reading. You did not disappoint.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-37355107359591949722012-07-04T04:31:42.776-07:002012-07-04T04:31:42.776-07:00The pulling together,the synchronous scripting... ...The pulling together,the synchronous scripting... I get a sense of that although not sure on the allusions of some of the lines.... It does roll off the tongue and around the mind though :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-23393503773325749752012-07-03T18:06:47.303-07:002012-07-03T18:06:47.303-07:00Strongly visual, but still, it isn't just pict...Strongly visual, but still, it isn't just pictures, there's a great deal of substance here, certainly in the loaded beginning, but also in the ambiguity of the final lines, where you are describing, I think, more than just a color, or a painting.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-74579721772199942092012-07-03T17:25:52.660-07:002012-07-03T17:25:52.660-07:00Your third stanza is outstanding. I always try to...Your third stanza is outstanding. I always try to eat a potato chip when I read your work. You always present such a unique and creative dip to flavour my ordinary perspective into something more than I would have imagined on my own. Oh, I liked this very much!henry clemmonshttp://henryclemmons.wordpress.com/2012/07/03/tween/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-47417584477305935892012-07-03T16:16:35.785-07:002012-07-03T16:16:35.785-07:00There's a visionary quality to the poem, as it...There's a visionary quality to the poem, as it comes alive with your very orecise words, arranged so delicately in images and notions that hover around meaning but leave us with possibilities ungrasped. Lovely really.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-18211379893796606722012-07-03T13:18:19.141-07:002012-07-03T13:18:19.141-07:00any time ma'am...smiles....always grea to see ...any time ma'am...smiles....always grea to see you...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-54649889816562312722012-07-02T21:19:28.356-07:002012-07-02T21:19:28.356-07:00i like draped desert sea horses
where are the ko...i like draped desert sea horses<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2012/07/02/where-are-the-koi/" rel="nofollow">where are the koi</a>zongrikhttp://zongrik.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-36273636422252076262012-07-02T13:38:04.201-07:002012-07-02T13:38:04.201-07:00I enjoy your subtle alliterations.
=)I enjoy your subtle alliterations.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-35572151986917293002012-07-02T08:42:18.078-07:002012-07-02T08:42:18.078-07:00"there are colors and consorts
of visionaries..."there are colors and consorts<br />of visionaries, weeds through which a wisdom<br />presents aspects of knowing"<br /><br />The leaders and powers that be, obviously did not find it easy as they had to take into account all kinds of obstacles. That's how I read this and I think it's true! Great write bkm! <br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-55862269421291284582012-07-01T20:33:14.393-07:002012-07-01T20:33:14.393-07:00Brian - many thanks my friend...bkmBrian - many thanks my friend...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-21384774116557679822012-07-01T20:32:50.758-07:002012-07-01T20:32:50.758-07:00Thank you Gemmma I am glad you liked it...bkmThank you Gemmma I am glad you liked it...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-85980512399553011812012-07-01T20:31:56.622-07:002012-07-01T20:31:56.622-07:00Thank you Kay - I really appreciate your works th...Thank you Kay - I really appreciate your works thank you again...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-34754859493536383012012-07-01T20:29:01.488-07:002012-07-01T20:29:01.488-07:00Really like the colors and image in this prompt......Really like the colors and image in this prompt...thank you for posting and commenting...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-72257021646118114802012-07-01T20:28:22.614-07:002012-07-01T20:28:22.614-07:00thank you Laurie..I always love your comments...bk...thank you Laurie..I always love your comments...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-27311015483976929592012-07-01T20:25:51.337-07:002012-07-01T20:25:51.337-07:00Mary thank you for reading and your kind words I t...Mary thank you for reading and your kind words I take them to heart...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-80770074082311468002012-07-01T20:23:53.642-07:002012-07-01T20:23:53.642-07:00Thank you Brenda...bkmThank you Brenda...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-68639106107267249632012-07-01T20:23:24.003-07:002012-07-01T20:23:24.003-07:00Thank you so much William life is filled as are we...Thank you so much William life is filled as are we with contradictions...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-30201719915516140042012-07-01T16:25:42.014-07:002012-07-01T16:25:42.014-07:00nice...that first stanza is esp tight for me bk......nice...that first stanza is esp tight for me bk...your opening lines are grippers...good stuff...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-52085110027345174582012-07-01T15:12:36.652-07:002012-07-01T15:12:36.652-07:00Especially love the poetic "weeds" and &...Especially love the poetic "weeds" and "desert seashores". Like some surreal reality!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-65426963872035473732012-07-01T12:09:17.158-07:002012-07-01T12:09:17.158-07:00lovely, lovely,lovely..esp the glasgow maiden and ...lovely, lovely,lovely..esp the glasgow maiden and urns grecian blue...mmmmKayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16584116146098939783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-31026911830475661952012-07-01T11:55:32.076-07:002012-07-01T11:55:32.076-07:00I especially like "driven and divine"......I especially like "driven and divine"...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-42365680694879632572012-07-01T10:40:09.837-07:002012-07-01T10:40:09.837-07:00I really love this:
the contrasts of worlds do no...I really love this:<br /><br />the contrasts of worlds do not come<br />in possessionLaurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-33549910248288438192012-07-01T09:29:39.527-07:002012-07-01T09:29:39.527-07:00This is lovely, and your use of language is so ski...This is lovely, and your use of language is so skillful.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-1750095083644079452012-07-01T08:43:46.713-07:002012-07-01T08:43:46.713-07:00Love your use of color throughout the piece.Love your use of color throughout the piece.brenda whttp://undercaws.com/2012/07/01/his-perfect-other/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-61489247146204956232012-07-01T08:08:35.831-07:002012-07-01T08:08:35.831-07:00The first stanza quite captures the subtlety of al...The first stanza quite captures the subtlety of all that - the self in the contradictions...WAShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10403669322174979974noreply@blogger.com