tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post4502612943185846877..comments2023-12-31T18:57:00.607-08:00Comments on Signed.....bkm: The Spellsigned...bkmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comBlogger46125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-45008736987826432252010-08-20T19:35:57.950-07:002010-08-20T19:35:57.950-07:00great one shot...i love that u've added quotes...great one shot...i love that u've added quotes in between:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-87104012815687470622010-08-20T04:45:22.447-07:002010-08-20T04:45:22.447-07:00the quotes gives a certain air to the lines afterw...the quotes gives a certain air to the lines afterwards adn before... nice work :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-84922869318320784112010-08-19T23:36:51.679-07:002010-08-19T23:36:51.679-07:00Intriguing, thought-provoking, intuitive - yet con...Intriguing, thought-provoking, intuitive - yet contained within a tight theme/structure. Exemplary.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-79418831389586479252010-08-18T19:43:02.541-07:002010-08-18T19:43:02.541-07:00I like the repetition of words throughout.
I thin...I like the repetition of words throughout. <br />I think, therefore I am<br /> therefore time must be<br />but who knows when it is<br />no moreKatherine Krigehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00737873330498032718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-14962495348752845862010-08-18T18:44:30.471-07:002010-08-18T18:44:30.471-07:00loved the poem... think it works really well with ...loved the poem... think it works really well with the quotes and flows very nicely!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-30884199728518874362010-08-18T17:14:49.706-07:002010-08-18T17:14:49.706-07:00If time were no more, who could tell it? Really li...If time were no more, who could tell it? Really liked this poem.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-71782539795159320092010-08-18T16:21:03.987-07:002010-08-18T16:21:03.987-07:00Pondering something huge-- bold and intriguing! An...Pondering something huge-- bold and intriguing! An excellent write!<br />http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-48181962558103484162010-08-18T13:46:56.178-07:002010-08-18T13:46:56.178-07:00oh boy!! What grand imagery!! To even think of a w...oh boy!! What grand imagery!! To even think of a world without "time" is SOMETHING!! <br />This is a masterpiece, bkm... because it is pure imagination and absolutely fantastic! I am actually to imagine a time without time... phhheewww<br />You are a true romantic, to the core!!! :)Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-70628685479643407042010-08-18T13:42:53.199-07:002010-08-18T13:42:53.199-07:00This is a lovely piece of writing. I love how you&...This is a lovely piece of writing. I love how you've interwoven the quotes with the poetry. Nice job. :-)Paul Andrew Russellhttp://www.paulandrewrussel.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-77818626966128647592010-08-18T12:13:38.787-07:002010-08-18T12:13:38.787-07:00What an interesting thing to do to include the quo...What an interesting thing to do to include the quotes added some spice to the poem, which can stand alone just as well either way a really good read.<br /><br />Joannyjoannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03338150531816845279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-29245815794090935542010-08-18T09:48:21.921-07:002010-08-18T09:48:21.921-07:00The quotes add a certain something that worked wel...The quotes add a certain something that worked well with the poem.<br /><br />(Did Einstein have a gambling problem?)Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-45373224973611486242010-08-18T08:45:47.133-07:002010-08-18T08:45:47.133-07:00Oh, this was so creative, with the use of the quot...Oh, this was so creative, with the use of the quotes really enriching your words. I love it!PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-74096824658742753552010-08-18T08:42:51.277-07:002010-08-18T08:42:51.277-07:00I like the content of the quotes. I wonder if they...I like the content of the quotes. I wonder if they could be divided into lines more like found poetry?<br /><br />I especially like the collection of questions you have pulled together here.<br /><br />Now I'm off to Wikipedia to learn what Plank's Constant is... the constant size of a quanta in quantum physics. Of course!Marcus Goodyearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07255781957722144278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-36674357069447942682010-08-18T05:58:07.401-07:002010-08-18T05:58:07.401-07:00I like the topic of this poem; dealing with the pe...I like the topic of this poem; dealing with the perplexities of existence and contemplating the input of a deity and playing that idea against one of free will. These thoughts must have united our kind since our earliest beginnings. You have written a wonderful piece and I agree the quotes direct the readers thinking and your words expand the search. Well done. GayBeachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-1588043525962306182010-08-18T03:46:28.392-07:002010-08-18T03:46:28.392-07:00Totally got captured into this realm of spell :D T...Totally got captured into this realm of spell :D Thank for sharing this wonderful read=PAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-7110403334453629642010-08-18T03:14:44.987-07:002010-08-18T03:14:44.987-07:00I liked how you worked the quotes in. It takes sen...I liked how you worked the quotes in. It takes sensitivity to find our words in others' words, or theirs in ours.L.L. Barkathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13333960142447144678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-51817166652798607272010-08-18T02:34:27.854-07:002010-08-18T02:34:27.854-07:00A real gray-matter squeeze. Yes "what if ...&...A real gray-matter squeeze. Yes "what if ..."<br />I love the challenges you pose, I really enjoyed this piece and it really is food for thoughtAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08915236568015079389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-3106280186631542672010-08-18T00:51:53.145-07:002010-08-18T00:51:53.145-07:00i liked the use of quote..it bolstered your verse....i liked the use of quote..it bolstered your verse..its such an interesting subject to cover and you did it well...but what is time other than just a passing of breath and thought! when we start to measure it our lifes seem much shorter!!! cheers and a great One Shot peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-45616379113651678542010-08-17T22:30:56.963-07:002010-08-17T22:30:56.963-07:00I liked the inclusion of the quotes - it added a w...I liked the inclusion of the quotes - it added a weight and a dimension. And your last stanza really opens everything right up. Really enjoyed this.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-28799464628752921422010-08-17T22:10:22.541-07:002010-08-17T22:10:22.541-07:00Thank you everyone for sweet comments...blessings....Thank you everyone for sweet comments...blessings....I have always like this piece....because I love both physics and the study of world religions...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-27555288855811099772010-08-17T22:06:57.903-07:002010-08-17T22:06:57.903-07:00Like the quotes. I'm glad it worked out the wa...Like the quotes. I'm glad it worked out the way it did. No time or space too much to consider<br /><br />Deep one my friend and great for One Shot<br /><br />moon smilesmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-12574042607981661422010-08-17T21:58:14.531-07:002010-08-17T21:58:14.531-07:00Wow. Wonderful piece. LOVE the inclusion of the ...Wow. Wonderful piece. LOVE the inclusion of the quotes. Awesome stuff, bkm!Tinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08925730745204736744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-64570527286661963902010-08-17T19:30:23.280-07:002010-08-17T19:30:23.280-07:00Wow! So intriguing. The quotes are so interesting,...Wow! So intriguing. The quotes are so interesting, I had never heard of any of them before. Great addition to your wonderful poem.CMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15697762495151569561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-58350355885897162922010-08-17T19:23:29.808-07:002010-08-17T19:23:29.808-07:00Of course God rolls those old laughing bones. ;-)Of course God rolls those old laughing bones. ;-)Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-8306803937075227332010-08-17T18:59:09.391-07:002010-08-17T18:59:09.391-07:00Wonderful poem and very lovely quotes, definitely ...Wonderful poem and very lovely quotes, definitely one of a kind. Great work bkm.Wild Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05260455210731142858noreply@blogger.com