tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post4105378122652297194..comments2023-12-31T18:57:00.607-08:00Comments on Signed.....bkm: colorless rainsigned...bkmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comBlogger36125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-72510912562020924042016-08-15T13:03:03.909-07:002016-08-15T13:03:03.909-07:00Very good. An ejoyable read and re-read too.Very good. An ejoyable read and re-read too.Julianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-427234557292046892016-08-15T02:39:26.183-07:002016-08-15T02:39:26.183-07:00It moves with the rhythm of a song until just befo...It moves with the rhythm of a song until just before the end, then the last verse changes in rhythm – perhaps appropriate to the mood of that particular conclusion.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-67984530642458855692016-08-15T00:52:29.047-07:002016-08-15T00:52:29.047-07:00Excellent write :)Excellent write :)Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-79630878925697856942016-08-14T22:12:55.438-07:002016-08-14T22:12:55.438-07:00ha...our limit is set by default....can't cros...ha...our limit is set by default....can't cross the boundary...sigh...a beautifully reflective poem...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-1678753870228797912016-08-14T16:26:28.577-07:002016-08-14T16:26:28.577-07:00Beautiful poem!Beautiful poem!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-55436452655870659672016-08-14T14:51:30.035-07:002016-08-14T14:51:30.035-07:00Not free to be not free--that is completely winged...Not free to be not free--that is completely winged!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-78376170526243436242016-08-14T11:43:08.438-07:002016-08-14T11:43:08.438-07:00Beautiful; and I enjoyed the comparison at the end...Beautiful; and I enjoyed the comparison at the end. So much to wonder about!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-54480231464254018452016-08-14T10:28:31.344-07:002016-08-14T10:28:31.344-07:00This is gorgeous, especially "laughing in awe...This is gorgeous, especially "laughing in awe of the colorless rain", and "no more free than the swallow is free of its wing". Wow!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-33804040618268411802016-08-14T09:36:36.820-07:002016-08-14T09:36:36.820-07:00Love to revisit... the swallow and it's double...Love to revisit... the swallow and it's double meaning worked on me this time.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-21515852557868962312016-08-14T07:31:37.088-07:002016-08-14T07:31:37.088-07:00And your words ARE full of knowing - even the noti...And your words ARE full of knowing - even the notion of Colourless Rain is really quite stunning - a thought that would pass by unnoticed had you not caught it so carefullyJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-3792782525440955112016-08-13T19:29:53.592-07:002016-08-13T19:29:53.592-07:00Thank you for your comments...bkmThank you for your comments...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-91771420751713699512016-08-13T19:29:18.343-07:002016-08-13T19:29:18.343-07:00Thanks for reading ...bkmThanks for reading ...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-31406053887358456182016-08-13T19:28:41.574-07:002016-08-13T19:28:41.574-07:00Thank you Bryan...bkmThank you Bryan...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-57895903071643184482016-08-13T19:28:17.722-07:002016-08-13T19:28:17.722-07:00Thank you much. I do appreciate...bkmThank you much. I do appreciate...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-51442875993000282912016-08-13T19:27:52.857-07:002016-08-13T19:27:52.857-07:00Thank you much Tim...bkmThank you much Tim...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-22379644686277441062016-08-13T19:27:11.195-07:002016-08-13T19:27:11.195-07:00Thank you much Bjorn...bkmThank you much Bjorn...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-3611560851505737592016-08-13T19:26:41.408-07:002016-08-13T19:26:41.408-07:00Thank you much Susan...bkmThank you much Susan...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-324432640475556862016-08-13T19:26:09.504-07:002016-08-13T19:26:09.504-07:00Thank you Sanaa...bkmThank you Sanaa...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-23255676760139622462016-08-13T19:25:41.169-07:002016-08-13T19:25:41.169-07:00Thank you very much Gayle...bkmThank you very much Gayle...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-8864754424914180912016-08-13T19:25:14.027-07:002016-08-13T19:25:14.027-07:00Thank you Kim...bkmThank you Kim...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-8268800444657853572016-08-13T12:54:03.299-07:002016-08-13T12:54:03.299-07:00Great poem - superb ending!Great poem - superb ending!Kim M. Russellhttp://writinginnorthnorfolk.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-92054509767454451822016-08-13T10:31:48.938-07:002016-08-13T10:31:48.938-07:00I love the rhythm of this poem and its lyricism. T...I love the rhythm of this poem and its lyricism. Thanks.Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-28757869857174001342016-08-13T08:47:19.219-07:002016-08-13T08:47:19.219-07:00Love the concluding 3 lines. Goes to show that fre...Love the concluding 3 lines. Goes to show that freedom might not always be a good thingAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05126230685516232230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-72402071172761853112016-08-12T17:00:43.160-07:002016-08-12T17:00:43.160-07:00At the end we all seek freedom.
I really liked th...At the end we all seek freedom. <br />I really liked the flow in these words. Well penned. Shadiatiquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14081852070984670290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-63208668085185778792016-08-11T20:50:07.095-07:002016-08-11T20:50:07.095-07:00The questions you posed reverberates here... when ...The questions you posed reverberates here... when can we say that we really are free? Mariahttps://mariawenttotown15.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com