tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post3999372186065625587..comments2023-12-31T18:57:00.607-08:00Comments on Signed.....bkm: I Will Not Celebrate You in Deathsigned...bkmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-24471479454011257202010-10-08T13:29:49.316-07:002010-10-08T13:29:49.316-07:00I like how you took an opening line that read like...I like how you took an opening line that read like a probable negative - in my view - and script-flipped into something more enduring and mystical (with a touch of eroticism).<br /><br />Good work. :)Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-32635821146778796872010-10-06T20:52:30.943-07:002010-10-06T20:52:30.943-07:00This one has som much depth...thought provoking an...This one has som much depth...thought provoking and will also read it again:) Great write my friend xxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-63999212436445589272010-10-06T17:28:17.435-07:002010-10-06T17:28:17.435-07:00I will have to read this one over a few times to g...I will have to read this one over a few times to get everything there is in its depth if thats even possible. Great poem! :)Riverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09438967617636244335noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-28988747962657238552010-10-06T16:04:22.471-07:002010-10-06T16:04:22.471-07:00my hands fractured in service this vision really g...my hands fractured in service this vision really got me. Lots of imagery, vivid emotion, good work.SuziCatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04025931724313344438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-39059651609982682522010-10-06T13:43:10.288-07:002010-10-06T13:43:10.288-07:00Both a celebration to live and an exhortation to t...Both a celebration to live and an exhortation to take it to its fullest. Well written with a firm touch on many levels. Well done. Thanks, Gay @beachannyBeachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-74200642520585428932010-10-06T11:18:18.294-07:002010-10-06T11:18:18.294-07:00Intriguing One Shot, bkm... and I'm with you: ...Intriguing One Shot, bkm... and I'm with you: Celebrate Life, not Death!<br /><br />(So, no wake then?)Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-84641815386394632562010-10-06T11:05:16.170-07:002010-10-06T11:05:16.170-07:00"I loved you as a human - half god, half
demo..."I loved you as a human - half god, half<br />demon that crawled my leg and bit my<br />heart"<br /><br />Powerful words, stark, vivid imagery. An emotional ride, and very thoughtful. Quite well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-80376161201921441872010-10-06T10:59:46.200-07:002010-10-06T10:59:46.200-07:00wow - what strong words...nursed you towards the c...wow - what strong words...nursed you towards the climbing tree...was my favorite line..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-58037307676358577492010-10-06T10:06:01.969-07:002010-10-06T10:06:01.969-07:00Great piece bkm and the sorrow and courage is felt...Great piece bkm and the sorrow and courage is felt through out.Wild Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05260455210731142858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-54472286821967864062010-10-06T08:57:55.836-07:002010-10-06T08:57:55.836-07:00Mackie, this is very emotional for sure! Excellent...Mackie, this is very emotional for sure! Excellent verse and title.. it is filled with strong love and hints of betrayal as well! A masterpiece!<br /><br />My One Shot Is HERE:<br /><a href="http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/2010/10/05/the-elements/" rel="nofollow">http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/2010/10/05/the-elements/</a>Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-1594693834731350132010-10-06T08:14:11.094-07:002010-10-06T08:14:11.094-07:00Excellent writing, really incredible and vivid. Wo...Excellent writing, really incredible and vivid. Wonderful work... I agree with Talon, layers of such depth and needs to be read several times! :) AprilAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-88279764782298508512010-10-06T00:46:37.702-07:002010-10-06T00:46:37.702-07:00Outstanding piece of work. The title befits the po...Outstanding piece of work. The title befits the poem. Very nicely done.<br /><br />Cheers!Emmanuel Ibokhttp://www.lordemmanuel.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-20353136275127187562010-10-06T00:29:57.642-07:002010-10-06T00:29:57.642-07:00Some great lines and deep thoughts in this. Excell...Some great lines and deep thoughts in this. Excellent.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-86215183843357402782010-10-05T23:11:41.840-07:002010-10-05T23:11:41.840-07:00It was nice to revisit this again.. thanks
ॐ नमः ...It was nice to revisit this again.. thanks<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />Twitter: @VerseEveryDay<br />Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-13102098870296291892010-10-05T23:02:46.045-07:002010-10-05T23:02:46.045-07:00There is a beautiful sadness in this poem, and you...There is a beautiful sadness in this poem, and your word choice makes the thematic development very easy to follow even amongst the more personal revelations of suffering in the name of love. You have such a strong voice as a narrator, makes reading all your poetry a very aesthetic experience. Thanks for posting on 1AQ.<br /><br />crb.Caribbean Foolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16211032750843178534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-31286019618950655632010-10-05T21:27:57.402-07:002010-10-05T21:27:57.402-07:00Oh, the imagery in this poem, bkm! So rich and lay...Oh, the imagery in this poem, bkm! So rich and layered and just so really really fine. It's one of those poems that needs to be read several times as it reveals itself more with each read.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-74803350940080365772010-10-05T20:44:17.505-07:002010-10-05T20:44:17.505-07:00"half god, half demon crawled up your leg and..."half god, half demon crawled up your leg and bit your heart..." Love that line. What great images you paint with your words.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-11623498680750916162010-10-05T20:07:57.721-07:002010-10-05T20:07:57.721-07:00thank you eveyone for your comments....blessings.....thank you eveyone for your comments....blessings...and tomorrow I should have a break and get a a chance to start reading everyones One Shot...thanks again...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-38580748146528152682010-10-05T20:03:32.699-07:002010-10-05T20:03:32.699-07:00Celebrate the breath, not the death. Fantastic lin...Celebrate the breath, not the death. Fantastic lines throughout..."and loving you yet is easy," it's that interjection that gets me in this one. So well done.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-53870825707246472902010-10-05T19:35:34.776-07:002010-10-05T19:35:34.776-07:00That love has such devotion laced with pain.
Who w...That love has such devotion laced with pain.<br />Who wants to embrace death??? or that pain<br /><br />I love the struggle in this piece<br /><br />Thanks for sharing with One Shot<br /><br />Love from the Moonmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-22541447629852349702010-10-05T19:03:03.110-07:002010-10-05T19:03:03.110-07:00These lines stand out: "crawled my leg and bi...These lines stand out: "crawled my leg and bit/ my heart", "nursed you towards the climbing tree", "my hands fractured in service to aid you...." And also the wonderful ending.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-76743628730641608382010-10-05T18:36:20.013-07:002010-10-05T18:36:20.013-07:00half god, half
demon that crawled my leg and bit ...half god, half <br />demon that crawled my leg and bit my<br />heart...fantastic!KBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02621937316200868307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-1421930145982413392010-10-05T17:52:20.459-07:002010-10-05T17:52:20.459-07:00This poem is to be tasted and savored, sipped and ...This poem is to be tasted and savored, sipped and suckled for the fine fruit it bears.<br /><br />Here is my contribution to One Shot this week - <a href="http://petzoldspracticalprose.blogspot.com/2010/10/one-shot-wednesday-touch.html" rel="nofollow">The Touch</a>.Monkey Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-14708886134320106782010-10-05T16:54:54.500-07:002010-10-05T16:54:54.500-07:00Need to read between the lines...my favorite kind ...Need to read between the lines...my favorite kind of poetry.<br />(But things that crawl up my leg usually bite me on the butt!)Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-69629119345211259782010-10-05T15:51:08.074-07:002010-10-05T15:51:08.074-07:00Oh My BKM..once again..you take my breath away wit...Oh My BKM..once again..you take my breath away with every line..i can't even begin to pick up a favorite! LOVED it all..Dylan Thomas it is, but yours is flavored i might add..Excellent One shot :)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.com