tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post3026447067214407675..comments2023-12-31T18:57:00.607-08:00Comments on Signed.....bkm: straddledsigned...bkmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-27122730426521821072011-10-30T04:30:31.203-07:002011-10-30T04:30:31.203-07:00"...color has now drawn its blood inward"..."...color has now drawn its blood inward" intrigues me...giggle...I like what Mary said about the poetry writing app!Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-40840186042705478242011-10-29T08:46:10.396-07:002011-10-29T08:46:10.396-07:00This I like, a lot. The words and the reflections ...This I like, a lot. The words and the reflections - so nicely done!Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-6453060865226343732011-10-29T07:20:45.870-07:002011-10-29T07:20:45.870-07:00Your poem and photograph really compliment one ano...Your poem and photograph really compliment one another. When will there be a poetry writing app? LOL.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-59119967331821673042011-10-29T04:45:33.989-07:002011-10-29T04:45:33.989-07:00I loved it!I loved it!annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-58846127498686596262011-10-28T17:40:46.528-07:002011-10-28T17:40:46.528-07:00I love it!I love it!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-86601141535277520772011-10-28T17:04:30.899-07:002011-10-28T17:04:30.899-07:00I enjoyed so much about this poem, the seeming/sea...I enjoyed so much about this poem, the seeming/seamless, the flow of "v"s in the second stanza, the explanation of the colourlessness of the prompt, the feeling of time shifting forward and backward as blood is drawn in rather than splashing out...also the stamp collection down the side somehow added to it.Kathy Bischopinghttp://drinkthenewwine.blogspot.com/2011/10/where-you-are-now.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-11008308488865508122011-10-28T15:26:24.120-07:002011-10-28T15:26:24.120-07:00Love this and one day we will be an app to our mac...Love this and one day we will be an app to our machines!<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-15355747034309096752011-10-28T14:32:33.152-07:002011-10-28T14:32:33.152-07:00Awesome write. Tight construction. It's symmet...Awesome write. Tight construction. It's symmetry subtle. I love this piece.emmett wheatfallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07466994239329611740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-34952987712804621442011-10-28T14:03:00.355-07:002011-10-28T14:03:00.355-07:00yes, we almost don't need our bodies, just our...yes, we almost don't need our bodies, just our machines.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-36538115112238283762011-10-28T12:51:11.508-07:002011-10-28T12:51:11.508-07:00nice...the falling glass from the last tree...grea...nice...the falling glass from the last tree...great visual...nice play on android as well...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-19652972782412918832011-10-28T12:22:25.043-07:002011-10-28T12:22:25.043-07:00i feel between two worlds reading this, very inter...i feel between two worlds reading this, very interesting.Everyday Goddesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00486528297252417282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-81368409670363685792011-10-28T11:06:15.276-07:002011-10-28T11:06:15.276-07:00From start to finish, this poem shows reflections....From start to finish, this poem shows reflections. Nice!!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-61141332971701427802011-10-28T10:54:34.372-07:002011-10-28T10:54:34.372-07:00oh i much like the simplified itself into a mirror...oh i much like the simplified itself into a mirrored image..and the falling glass from the last tree..great images...smiled on the seamlessly android...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com