tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post2650546244339769684..comments2023-12-31T18:57:00.607-08:00Comments on Signed.....bkm: half emptysigned...bkmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-12361483986829694452010-10-05T00:33:28.648-07:002010-10-05T00:33:28.648-07:00Well done ... I like the whole poem, but the last ...Well done ... I like the whole poem, but the last lines are "punch" lines, so to speak. Nice.<br /><br />Happy potluck, bkm.JamieDedeshttp://musingbymoonlight.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-60257729889584129342010-09-30T20:06:38.042-07:002010-09-30T20:06:38.042-07:00Beautiful journey of thought... liked the way you ...Beautiful journey of thought... liked the way you left yourself alone with the glass... Very well said..<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय <br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/<br />Connect with me at Twitter @VerseEveryDayShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-12296362678949842522010-09-28T18:02:26.103-07:002010-09-28T18:02:26.103-07:00Sometimes there's not much else you can do...I...Sometimes there's not much else you can do...I like!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-31945265182864623282010-09-28T11:33:04.352-07:002010-09-28T11:33:04.352-07:00glass scratched blue.
economical and masterful us...glass scratched blue.<br /><br />economical and masterful use of words throughout. amazing poem.reetamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12030255134625573815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-39590559285548031352010-09-28T10:02:01.928-07:002010-09-28T10:02:01.928-07:00sometimes, the half empty glass just needs to be l...sometimes, the half empty glass just needs to be left! <br /><br /><a href="http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/2010/09/28/the-crown/" rel="nofollow">My Potluck Poem</a>Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-66141957868918252402010-09-28T06:25:41.441-07:002010-09-28T06:25:41.441-07:00This is a satisfying poem! Loaded with tension, an...This is a satisfying poem! Loaded with tension, and yet ... it concludes triumphantly for the narrator. So well done. Wow!Christinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06291220353313572984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-8547203144689111482010-09-27T10:02:34.843-07:002010-09-27T10:02:34.843-07:00Leaving the half-empty glass. Perfect.Leaving the half-empty glass. Perfect.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14843459906469325667noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-49894712670123365212010-09-27T08:11:04.126-07:002010-09-27T08:11:04.126-07:00This made me think of creative ideas abandoned and...This made me think of creative ideas abandoned and new ones explored...<br /><br />I loved the flow...TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-31200518076487332792010-09-27T07:03:20.810-07:002010-09-27T07:03:20.810-07:00These lines are especially poignant to me:
>&g...These lines are especially poignant to me:<br /><br />>>> unread lines on a blank page.....<br />>>> my mind turns a corner....<br /><br /><a href="http://juliejordanscott.typepad.com/jjspoetry/2010/09/backstage-fibonacci.html" rel="nofollow"> My Monday Poetry Potluck: Fibonacci. </a>Julie Jordan Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06558015761690505791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-29848763585089752002010-09-27T06:51:12.731-07:002010-09-27T06:51:12.731-07:00wohoho! NICE..wohoho! NICE..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-18271251807377866362010-09-27T01:43:13.055-07:002010-09-27T01:43:13.055-07:00Amazingly written, glad to have you in for Poetry ...Amazingly written, glad to have you in for Poetry Potluck =PRiikaInfinityyhttp://riikainfinityy.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-60859705754492255352010-09-26T22:17:56.379-07:002010-09-26T22:17:56.379-07:00I really enjoyed the read...thanks for linking wit...I really enjoyed the read...thanks for linking with Potluck!! Have a great week ahead my friend xxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-2109458968537636262010-09-26T20:11:36.818-07:002010-09-26T20:11:36.818-07:00I like this poem very much... "my mind turns ...I like this poem very much... "my mind turns a corner..." and finding the looked-for road and following on the instant - love the sentiment expressed and the expression itself.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-81757973391963173582010-09-26T19:19:30.783-07:002010-09-26T19:19:30.783-07:00Certainly does bring us a surprise or two as we tr...Certainly does bring us a surprise or two as we travel down the road. This is a great poem.Teresahttp://razzamadazzle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-76656345094779545702010-09-26T18:51:22.423-07:002010-09-26T18:51:22.423-07:00Sometimes it's hard to leave someone behind, ...Sometimes it's hard to leave someone behind, other times we need to run. I enjoyed your writing. :))Eaton Bennett aka Berenice Albrechthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15155384243916982826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-31163757110691649752010-09-26T18:13:08.269-07:002010-09-26T18:13:08.269-07:00adventurous poem,
the ending leaves readers linger...adventurous poem,<br />the ending leaves readers lingering...<br />well captured uncertainty of life.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-51225755506069153362010-09-24T15:50:34.037-07:002010-09-24T15:50:34.037-07:00Oh I love the touch of cynicism that accents the b...Oh I love the touch of cynicism that accents the beauty of your words-- nicely done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-75455589281825733892010-09-23T17:25:18.186-07:002010-09-23T17:25:18.186-07:00"creating a palette of mood" Ooooh so ro..."creating a palette of mood" Ooooh so romantic. I actually have a Queen Anne vanity it became mine when my mother passed so I could envision it throughout the poem!Amanda Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11631827449933791507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-80830760935865338262010-09-23T04:08:25.259-07:002010-09-23T04:08:25.259-07:00I hope they catch up! Thanks for stopping by.I hope they catch up! Thanks for stopping by.JDaniel4's Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10354900916937838719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-49223239214956247202010-09-22T22:37:44.223-07:002010-09-22T22:37:44.223-07:00Sorry that is not it....I should have asked everyo...Sorry that is not it....I should have asked everyone to give there take on it...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-73707748259089968102010-09-22T22:31:20.992-07:002010-09-22T22:31:20.992-07:00Am expecting you to get a glass half full at the e...Am expecting you to get a glass half full at the end of your little trip hopefully the one left behind gets it and follows you or you find another... either way you're done...lovely bkm.Wild Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05260455210731142858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-56302997120689923252010-09-22T18:36:36.159-07:002010-09-22T18:36:36.159-07:00I notice you labeled your poem as Random and if so...I notice you labeled your poem as Random and if so, the unexpected spawn of one's Muse often invokes the strongest writing; at least that is my experience. To tread the path of chance without reservation. Such eloquence in a single piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-16956993378325841022010-09-22T18:22:14.852-07:002010-09-22T18:22:14.852-07:00thank you all....I was wondering how many got the ...thank you all....I was wondering how many got the meaning behind the piece...the first line came to me about two weeks ago when we were driving....bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-65703942368202045422010-09-22T17:18:28.330-07:002010-09-22T17:18:28.330-07:00oh, holding the glass half empty...tight close...t...oh, holding the glass half empty...tight close...too many miss the close but you nailed it...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-68596181761059230212010-09-22T16:22:48.115-07:002010-09-22T16:22:48.115-07:00Reminds me very much of a lisa Zaran poem, the nam...Reminds me very much of a lisa Zaran poem, the name of which escapes me just now. Evokes a similiar response in me.tuberiderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03039748415896465852noreply@blogger.com