tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post2412166157531687363..comments2023-12-31T18:57:00.607-08:00Comments on Signed.....bkm: prism of my bonesigned...bkmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-16608648509419788362013-03-20T06:35:48.726-07:002013-03-20T06:35:48.726-07:00Lovely, Barbara... I really like the double meanin...Lovely, Barbara... I really like the double meaning of pane.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-3170603879614982892013-03-19T22:53:53.483-07:002013-03-19T22:53:53.483-07:00Window panes, pages, and prisms - wonderful.Window panes, pages, and prisms - wonderful.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09589253190731511955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-26084948670860359612013-03-19T17:09:06.543-07:002013-03-19T17:09:06.543-07:00It is always such a treat for me to read your work...It is always such a treat for me to read your work. I like the scenes unfolded as pageshenry clemmonshttp://henryclemmons.wordpress.com/2013/03/19/its-not-the-same-i-say/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-65680342381446257992013-03-19T15:41:51.882-07:002013-03-19T15:41:51.882-07:00Stunning. This is a good example of how those punc...Stunning. This is a good example of how those punctuation marks, the use of bold font and enjambment can add so much to a poem. Love the images.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-8328030706798275892013-03-16T23:22:44.656-07:002013-03-16T23:22:44.656-07:00"call the candle softened, yet
call this day..."call the candle softened, yet<br /> call this day undone<br /> let each page reflect the prism, the<br /> prism of my bone - this<br /> casting of a lifetime <br /> written as my own, Oh!"<br /><br />"My candle burns at both ends; <br /> it will not last the night; <br /> but ah, my foes, <br /> and oh, my friends - it gives a lovely light!" <br /><br />Indeed you do!The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-34606797958760958342013-03-16T10:09:08.465-07:002013-03-16T10:09:08.465-07:00so very cool...love the call...and the use of excl...so very cool...love the call...and the use of exclamation points...it adds an expediency for me....the window panes make me think poems...small views of us we put to page...prism of my bones is just a cool phrase and rich with symbolism...very nice bkBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com