tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post2351752811753379035..comments2023-12-31T18:57:00.607-08:00Comments on Signed.....bkm: Surface-less Dove..signed...bkmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-20724726526179608472010-10-01T03:09:38.225-07:002010-10-01T03:09:38.225-07:00"With hope springs promise" and I enjoye..."With hope springs promise" and I enjoyed the promise of another flight of imagination.. Thanks for sharing..<br /><br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय <br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />Twitter @VerseEveryDay<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-65207957349183432852010-09-29T12:32:37.910-07:002010-09-29T12:32:37.910-07:00Kristin - when I started it - it was an internal s...Kristin - when I started it - it was an internal surrender to peace and took its voice to the external - it wanted to be heard....and yes can be read as such...thank you....bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-20008913721588822092010-09-29T12:07:56.111-07:002010-09-29T12:07:56.111-07:00This poem seems a little political to me am I read...This poem seems a little political to me am I reading that right? <br /><br />unqualified at peace negotiation,<br />surrender squandered beneath an unmade bed;<br />plucked barren<br />seeing freedom only as needed -<br /><br />It seems to me that these lines are so current with the world right now. <br /><br />I will read this one again and again. Beautifully written.Kristen Haskellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481526316071592146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-75490450628004292872010-09-28T23:27:36.274-07:002010-09-28T23:27:36.274-07:00Oohh...this was a very poignant read, bkm... I lik...Oohh...this was a very poignant read, bkm... I liked how you made the analogy here... it was stinging, but very well done indeed! <br />Thank you for sharing this poem with poetry potluck... it really was a rare treat!!!Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-31114587899897669202010-09-28T02:58:31.422-07:002010-09-28T02:58:31.422-07:00Beautiful..what else to say...you have portrayed ...Beautiful..what else to say...you have portrayed the struggle of the dove in such a way that even we feel like saying 'Dove fly ...,fly".Rashmihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05294504967496661652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-25566821209405541772010-09-27T23:07:53.330-07:002010-09-27T23:07:53.330-07:00Sigh... fly free little one, a very symbolic poem,...Sigh... fly free little one, a very symbolic poem, birds for centuries in almost all cultures are symbolic messengers of the Creator. Very creative write.<br /><br />Joanny<br />http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/joannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03338150531816845279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-86437538368445711732010-09-27T15:06:18.630-07:002010-09-27T15:06:18.630-07:00I agree, let the dove fly free...a powerful write ...I agree, let the dove fly free...a powerful write as always my friend. Loved the read xxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-90204163523235937172010-09-27T14:21:48.956-07:002010-09-27T14:21:48.956-07:00"Fly on, little wing..." - Jimi Hendrix"Fly on, little wing..." - Jimi HendrixBubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-74407869446365175702010-09-27T12:31:29.628-07:002010-09-27T12:31:29.628-07:00thanks for sharing...
Happy Monday!thanks for sharing...<br />Happy Monday!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-70348116858745057132010-09-27T12:04:05.265-07:002010-09-27T12:04:05.265-07:00A strong lament for peace not flourishing. Do you ...A strong lament for peace not flourishing. Do you know "We have gone too far; we do not know how to stop" by Edna St. Vincent Millay? yours reminds me of it.<br /><br />Mine fr the potluck is here: http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/2010/02/03/week-68/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-49397961880900682572010-09-26T16:56:27.535-07:002010-09-26T16:56:27.535-07:00love the structure of the poem and very wonderfull...love the structure of the poem and very wonderfully written =)~RiikaInfinityyhttp://riikainfinityy.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-2227058641162332442010-09-26T16:53:47.795-07:002010-09-26T16:53:47.795-07:00beautiful highlight of your subject,
love the imag...beautiful highlight of your subject,<br />love the image!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-58959162970598918652010-09-26T15:16:28.169-07:002010-09-26T15:16:28.169-07:00You poem true ... I like the use of the dove and t...You poem true ... I like the use of the dove and the artwork is stunning.<br /><br />Fine poem. Thank you! ... Poem on ...JamieDedeshttp://musingbymoonlight.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-16105159957151173522010-09-26T15:11:52.193-07:002010-09-26T15:11:52.193-07:00You had me at the first "dove" :) Good o...You had me at the first "dove" :) Good one!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-71836857964523068322010-09-26T14:53:55.469-07:002010-09-26T14:53:55.469-07:00The struggle of freedom ... nicely done.The struggle of freedom ... nicely done.Philip Thrifthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03021615111948806998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-44853320289293995542010-09-26T12:06:38.505-07:002010-09-26T12:06:38.505-07:00beautifully conveyed the message of hopebeautifully conveyed the message of hopeUma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-14784793524325426862010-09-26T10:11:19.883-07:002010-09-26T10:11:19.883-07:00thanks everyone....needed to excerise both side of...thanks everyone....needed to excerise both side of the brain...and this one started elsewhere....but lead me to this....blessings...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-80282061588552566102010-09-26T10:05:07.025-07:002010-09-26T10:05:07.025-07:00I agree...fly, dove fly. Well expressed sentiment...I agree...fly, dove fly. Well expressed sentiment!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-19569992194947656682010-09-26T09:57:26.385-07:002010-09-26T09:57:26.385-07:00An inforgettable poem! I see the white doves flyi...An inforgettable poem! I see the white doves flying!Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-31779580601224838072010-09-26T09:51:25.996-07:002010-09-26T09:51:25.996-07:00bkm
This is so beautiful!
Pamelabkm<br />This is so beautiful!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-52923016409538547122010-09-26T09:49:07.926-07:002010-09-26T09:49:07.926-07:00Dear bkm,
Lovely -as always. Different though from...Dear bkm,<br />Lovely -as always. Different though from your usual offerings. A bit more edgy.ninotazizhttp://www.pantundanselokaninotaziz.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-10007757626226358582010-09-26T09:26:42.992-07:002010-09-26T09:26:42.992-07:00Great post. Let the dove fly free.Great post. Let the dove fly free.Monkey Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-60314676809139958002010-09-26T05:58:43.166-07:002010-09-26T05:58:43.166-07:00Returning your visit and to answer your question: ...Returning your visit and to answer your question: I have moved back to Montreal and teaching part time again. Qatar is a nice place to visit but not to live.... :)<br /><br />Anne-MarieA 2 Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15210451903434090202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-70070911902665216082010-09-26T05:21:19.092-07:002010-09-26T05:21:19.092-07:00Hi there..
I wandered on to this post from other ...Hi there..<br /><br />I wandered on to this post from other blods and must say I am glad I did..thnks for the share..I loved the lines, the whole word play, not at all pretentious...<br /><br />I also write poems, You cld, if u wish visit my blog at www.versepoems.com<br /><br />ur opinion wld be invaluable..thnks.Pravin Nairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17357765148582244990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-83374865107490609352010-09-26T05:20:54.378-07:002010-09-26T05:20:54.378-07:00Very staccato; was that on purpose? Works very wel...Very staccato; was that on purpose? Works very well in the style/themes of the poem. I had the image of a wounded bird trying to fly over a battlefield and finding no place to land to rest. Nice effect and really loved the poem.<br /><br />crb.thefoolsbackpocket@gmail.comhttp://caribbeanfool.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com