tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post1615181010135332163..comments2023-12-31T18:57:00.607-08:00Comments on Signed.....bkm: metamorphosissigned...bkmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-77476940153867035902013-03-04T11:13:47.651-08:002013-03-04T11:13:47.651-08:00rich in construction love it , Chris http://velvet...rich in construction love it , Chris http://velvetmedia.wordpress.com/Chris Lawrencehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12082462583986448559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-43621677927326423952013-03-01T01:34:35.956-08:002013-03-01T01:34:35.956-08:00this is beautiful, the compact coccoon, and home. ...this is beautiful, the compact coccoon, and home. metamorphosis. i always wonder at the proprioception of the change from caterpillar to butterfly or moth. amazing world.lucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-14591632304220635072013-02-28T14:04:43.806-08:002013-02-28T14:04:43.806-08:00I especially enjoyed the 3rd stanza-- the crack in...I especially enjoyed the 3rd stanza-- the crack in the framing of this fragile world-- nice metaphore ~peace, JasonAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-49711300785795679242013-02-27T17:51:22.609-08:002013-02-27T17:51:22.609-08:00This was beautiful, with an especially powerful en...This was beautiful, with an especially powerful ending-- "i can clearly / recite the colors / from your flight"-- I loved it.Ursa Bowershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13841401660100984048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-60512813415914226922013-02-27T15:12:04.428-08:002013-02-27T15:12:04.428-08:00is not the beauty of being a writer in the mere ab...is not the beauty of being a writer in the mere ablity to take the tools of ones art with you -contained<br /><br />without cover, without passport and without declaration to anothers unwanted customs...<br /><br />that is what came to me with the reading of your comment...thank you much for your words...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-72023787857598862152013-02-27T14:53:01.745-08:002013-02-27T14:53:01.745-08:00thank you Gretchen..for your wonderful comments an...thank you Gretchen..for your wonderful comments and perspective...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-16422977886720269412013-02-27T14:51:58.518-08:002013-02-27T14:51:58.518-08:00Gaurang, i have not posted in Monday's child f...Gaurang, i have not posted in Monday's child for a while now..I have to think about starting that one again...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-54783353455701103462013-02-27T14:50:49.426-08:002013-02-27T14:50:49.426-08:00thank you...I do hope to take wing and experience ...thank you...I do hope to take wing and experience more colors of this wonderful life...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-11171374182261772002013-02-27T14:49:14.012-08:002013-02-27T14:49:14.012-08:00no there is no reason to be cured from loving...bk...no there is no reason to be cured from loving...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-82209261485039629562013-02-27T14:48:24.226-08:002013-02-27T14:48:24.226-08:00thank you Dulce nice to hear from you...bkmthank you Dulce nice to hear from you...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-43580657071236802332013-02-27T13:12:03.606-08:002013-02-27T13:12:03.606-08:00If I could mount, like butterfly wings on a framed...If I could mount, like butterfly wings on a framed piece of cardboard, the most evocative words of this verse, I would pin this: 'I can clearly recite the colors of your flight'Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-12851672875581046532013-02-27T13:00:52.846-08:002013-02-27T13:00:52.846-08:00The final two lines really spoke to me. Well, the ...The final two lines really spoke to me. Well, the final stanza actually because you're admitting to be a part of something but writing from the outside perspectiveAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13646917707699645492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-23696643574867385712013-02-23T23:37:54.991-08:002013-02-23T23:37:54.991-08:00Really strong and beautiful poem! By the way what ...Really strong and beautiful poem! By the way what happened to children's verse? I'm blogging after quite some time now, and I miss the prompts you used to give. I really hope you continue that blog, and you also keep writing!<br />Best of luck!<br />~GaurangGaurang Raohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01197327991289339685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-13385523320269455882013-02-23T02:14:25.487-08:002013-02-23T02:14:25.487-08:00Take wing too dear one, your colors outshine all o...Take wing too dear one, your colors outshine all others!The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-54302359672485891942013-02-22T17:38:35.685-08:002013-02-22T17:38:35.685-08:00i can think of no reason i would want to be cured ...i can think of no reason i would want to be cured of an excess of loving...just saying...smiles...reciting the colors of your flight is pretty evocative as well...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1230025349331591828.post-28037118432383634382013-02-22T13:46:22.317-08:002013-02-22T13:46:22.317-08:00My colors have gone in the shades of grey...a meta...My colors have gone in the shades of grey...a metamorphosis I am not liking- and<br />the cracking and the implossion is already going too far <br />So glad you can recite a flight for us<br /><br />Lovely writing B.<br />Thank youDulcehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08109609856487463466noreply@blogger.com